kthanksbye
2003-03-29 � 3:30 p.m.
*Because I need you more then me*
I look just like myself again
now that your not around
The world is blue, but I�m still grey
As the marks you left are hurting more
With every passing day"
- Send me a postcard - Honeyrocket
reviewed by tiff
First Impressions:
�it�s grey. Wow. What imagination.�
[3/5]
Content:
First entry I read was this. WOOT WOOT! Go Jessy! Beat down the stereotyping! Great emotion too! I like how you write. I normally skim through everyday stuff, but not for you. And you put emotions into your writing very easily, or so it seems. And you like the bold tag. Yay for bold! Good job, keep up the great work
I picked this song because you seem hurt, and it seems like it�s over a relationship. And that�s what the song is about.
[22/25]
Design:
It�s grey and navy. Pretty plain. It doesn�t really capture your attention all that much. The columns are really too small for my liking. And it really irks me how everything is in the center, and there are big spaces on both sides. Either make the columns bigger, or put some images on the side. Or quotes. Or something. Anything. [15/25]
Update:
A few skips here and there..
[8/10]
Navigation:
All on the left side. Nice and organized in little categories. Holy Shamoly you�ve got tons of links.
[5/5]
Errors:
Sometimes you don�t use capitals, a few typos here and there, nothing too bad.
[4/5]
Contact:
aim, aol, yahoo, email, guest book. You everyone�s favorite stalkee.
[5/5]
Bonus:
You�ve got too many. Extra points for you..
[18/15]
Returnable:
Yeah.
[5/5]
Score:[75/100] would have been higher had I liked your design more
rock n roll
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