msthangkp
2003-03-29 � 8:24 p.m.
msthangkp
A day in the life
"Don't bother trying to tell me your beliefs,
Your point of view looks pretty screwed to me
do this, do that, on track...
do me a favor and don't talk back."
-Shut Up - Kelly Osbourne
First Impressions:
I want color!
[3/5]
Content:
I love it! You're a great writer, and going on my favorites list. I know what you mean, about hypocritical parents and about being ordered to stay away from an older guy. I've been there. A lot of your entries are daylogs, but they're interesting-- I'm glad you found your purse! and some of your entries are packed with emotion, like this one about your mom drinking. I have a friend that went through the same thing. Hang in there. You seem like the perfect person to have a diary, like you need it and it's helping you. I chose Shup Up because you have a lot of disagreements with your mom, and it reminded me of it.
[25/25]
Design:Hmmmm. I don't like the colors (or lack of), but that's noly my opinion. I like the lines at the top and bottom, but I think they would look better as a graphic and with a rare font from a site (you could try dafont.com, that's what I use). Finally I think everything should be centered. Oh yes, and your older page is off on sizing, change it here.
[21/25]
Updates:
Some gaps and some multiples... and one of the entries on the March page is from February.
[8/10]
Navigation:
At the bottom of the entry, but I think you should but it outside of the div so that I don't have to scroll down to see it. You might want to add a previous and next link at the top, also.
[3/5]
Errors:
What I said before about the February entry, and nothing else that I saw.
[4/5]
Contact:
Mail, guestbook, notes.
[5/5]
Bonus:
Rings, cast, daily fact (I loved them), and a whole page full of more!
[16/15]
Returnable:
As I said, you're going in my profile!
[5/5]
Total:
[90/100]
Sarah is cool, and she reviewed you.
rock n roll
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