dead-kelsey
2003-03-29 � 2:44 p.m.
train in vain
but if you think you're free
try walking into a deli
and urinating on the cheese"
- Anarchy Burger - The Vandals
reviewed by tiff
First Impressions:
�hey, lynn had that template..�
[3/5]
Content:
First entry I read was about a review! Eep! I don�t like when people do that, unless it�s sorta like a side note. But the entry started off with it! This entry was interesting because you said people were �fucking idiots� for thinking America is wrong in going into war. I didn�t agree with it, but it was nice to see some emotion. You started showing more and more emotion as time went by, which is good. Your very opinionated on the war. As a Canadian, I have trouble seeing where you stand, but I guess we see things differently, especially with not actually being there and all. But I appreciate the emotion you bring when you talk about war. You think it�s what�s needed and you stand firm by your opinion. Good For you. I just read this entry and it was great. I feel the same way about music, so I could really relate.
You�ve got good emotion when you talk about war and music, but other then that it�s just day log type stuff. Try and carry that emotion throughout all your entries.
I picked Anarchy Burger as your song, because you kept saying that America has to rid Iraq of Hussein. I discussed this with many people in my class, and my teachers, and we all agree that if America takes Hussein away, they�re going to replace him with someone obviously. Then Iraq will be at the complete mercy of America. This is not a good idea, and Iraqis will be in the same situation they are now. The song just says �you may think you�re free, but you�re not�. whoof. that was long.
[18/25]
Design:
When I saw your username, I thought for sure you�d have a dead Kennedies layout. That would be so rad. Unless, of course, you don�t like DK. Then it wouldn�t be. My friend used to have the same layout, except in red. It�s ok, I really don�t like how there�s that whole space on the left. Maybe shoving things over a bit would help. And, you tend to write long titles for your entries, so maybe making the column where you have your last 5 entries would make that space less �all over the place�. But that�s just me being picky. Also, the font in the Older Pages is gigantomondo. Make it smaller, it�ll look more organized. Overall, it�s a nice design. Don�t mind me. I�m nitpick over every aspect of designs, since im a designer myself.
[18/25]
Update:
A few skips here in there, but you have multiples as well, and of course, servers.
[9/10]
Navigation:
All on the Left side. Perfect.
[5/5]
Errors:
Sometimes you don�t use capitals, a few typos here and there, nothing too bad.
[4/5]
Contact:
tagboard, notes, email, guestbook. Bingo.
[5/5]
Bonus:
quizzes (this page is named as extra. Maybe consider naming it quizzes. I was expecting a page with links to extras like playlist, about you, links etc etc), cast, imood, rings. .
[15/15]
Returnable:
Maybe. Not too sure.
[4/5]
Score:[81/100]
rock n roll
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