acutrythm
2003-04-24 � 10:07 a.m.
I Am A Hidden Shadow Beneath The Moonlight
With nothing better to do
...I woefully conclude
To take it out on you
I'm bored to the extreme
This world of foolish dreams
Disillusion
I am not who I seem to be
Yeah sure I might do harm...
-Bored and Extremely Dangerous - Bad Religion
First Impressions:
Um. Big, blurry picture of someone i don't know. And, wow, what a lot of...blue...
[2/5]
Content:
You write about Lee a lot. In fact, that's pretty much all you write about. About how you wish you were with him, how he did so-and-so and you wish you were with him, about how much you love him...you threw a few other things in there, about how you were bored and didn't know what to write except about...Lee. All in all, I was honestly bored to tears reading your diary. You need to talk about other things than Lee - and, if you are going to talk about him, make it interesting. Where you met, what you like about him, something. I started at the beginning looking for something that wasn't about Lee, something to make me want to give you more points...but I really just couldn't find anything. You really need to work on your content. The only thing that saved me from just not reviewing your diary was the little sheep dancing around my screen and the angry music I had on.
[05/25]
Design:
You made both of your designs that I saw - the design featuring Lee (what a suprise!) and one featuring Prince. Both had lots of blue. With the design of Lee, the picture was blurry, and the words were even more blurry - but you said you knew that. Everything was organized nicely. Thats a plus. But, the blues changed from lighter to darker when I went through your pages. The Prince layout...It was organized nicely too. The blue links were hard to see on top of the picture...you might want to put them under or on the other side of the picture. And, the "previous" link doesn't work in your new Prince layout...you typed in "perv" instead...The dark blue on black was hard on my eyes in both designs. Points for organization and self-made, but none for easy readibility. And it was just creepy to me that you had one of your boyfriend. Sorry.
[16/25]
Update:
You update more than once a day, usually. You also have multiples. Full points.
[10/10]
Navigation:
Easy, but hard to read.
[4/5]
Errors:
The colors changing, like I said. Some typos/spelling. I didn't really have a hard time understanding what you were saying though, so that's enough for me.
[4/5]
Contact:
Yep. Though, with the new layout, I couldn't get to them.
[5/5]
Bonus:
You had a lot of extras - or enough to satisfy me. Cast page. Several about you pages. A page of your "quizzypoos."
[15/15]
Returnable:
No. Sorry. I just didn't think it was interesting and it was hard for me to read (color-wise).
[0/5]
Total: [61/100]
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