de-structive
2003-06-15 � 11:37 p.m.
Les Mots � Mon �me.
"Can you see the changing of the winds?
Can you sense the stillness in the air?
Calm will remain...oh so shortly.
But i'll wait...till the seasons change.
i'll wait...till the fall comes."
- Third Season - A.F.I.
First Impressions:
arr... depressing? Decent layout though.
[3/5]
Content:
I don't want to be hypocritical but if it seems like it, go ahead and call me on it. You could show a tad bit more emotion. You tell the reader what happened (which I'd really like to compliment you on since it's easy to picture your situation) but you don't really... give insite on what you feel about it. With some things, you establish where you are mentally, but get around using emotion words. I chose this song because you set the scene, you let the reader know the who, what, when, where, and why... and while doing so, you kind of seem like you're waiting throughtout the entry, for something to really change. I really did enjoy your writing style, and I can't really tell you what to improve with your technique because I actually read more than I entended. Great job!
[22/25]
Design:I really like the layout. It's really appealing and just well planned out. The colors (err.. the shades of gray) are kind of... tiring BUT work with your style and spunk. Took me awhile to realize the mouseover, I like it!
[24/25]
Update:
yikes! Quite a few gaps!
[5/10]
Navigation:
along the entry to the left. Simple and easy! (arr! but why must you hide the cast?)
[5/5]
Errors:
None that I could find!
[5/5]
Contact:
e-mail, aim
[5/5]
Bonus:
cast, 101, playlist, and a list of others
[13/15]
Returnable:
I don't really like this section since it is completely bias, but - I'd come by every once in awhile to see what's new, but it wouldn't be daily.
[3/5]
Total: [85/ 100]
Reviewed by: Kristen
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