bookworm110
2003-04-28 � 7:39 p.m.
Bookworm110
m . i . s . s . h . a . p . e . n
"The more you try to find yourself, the more you are the same."
- Just Like Christopher Columbus - Nields
First Impressions:
Ok yo, really plain layout. Are you this plain? From what I read, you aren't, spice this up a bit. [2/5]
Content:
Ok, you sound like a very thoughtful person... and by this I mean you're full of thoughts. Not too considerate are we? Two can play at this, sorry you got reviewed by Lady Zanuff. But hey, like you said "Life sucks then you die." You seems to have loads of different thoughts, but they all come out the same: frikken depressing. Sure, you had your moments when I actually thought you weren't a depressed child seeking attention, but that came few. The reason I picked the above lyric is becuase you seem exactly like every other goth around. Nothing new under the sun for ya huh? I'll comment more about that under Bonus. Can't say I hate you, yet I definately can't say you're an awesome person. I think that's all I can say to ya. [10/25]
Design:
... what design? Please, you are WAY more than a red box. At least throw in a Kurt Cobain scheme. This plain designs sucks, you can do better. I give a one just because I feel like it. [1/25]
Update:
You updated well in the beginning, but now ya don't. I'll give you credit for what you have. [9/10]
Navigation:
Basic navigation, nothing flashy, nothing difficult. you'd have to be a moron to not find your way around. [5/5]
Errors:
Easily read. Bravo. Don't mind the cursing at all, heck, we all cuss at one point or another. Ho-hum, that's it. [5/5]
Contact:
E-mail, notes, and guestbook. I give a point for each, fair enough? [3/5]
Bonus:
This seems not too unique to me actually. Probably cause I see so many goths now you all act the same. You try to be individuals by acting just like each other. Oh well, there you have it. I give a low scoring here, seems too ordinary. [5/15]
Returnable:
::laughs hysterically then suddenly stops:: No, and not because of the lack of design or the fact you seem to be a very angry person, but becuase, well, you're not updating anymore. I show no mercy, sorry. [0/5]
Total: [40/100]
Lady Zanuff has spoken. Don't fear the reaper, man.
rock n roll
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