angelgirl76
2003-06-05 � 5:18 a.m.
Why does it hurt?
"Take this silver lining, keep it in your own sweet head
And shine it when the night is burning red
Shine it in the twilight
Shine it on the cold, cold ground
Shine it till these walls come tumbling down"
-Silver Lining - David Gray
First Impression:
"Oooh, very calming colors.. poor little girl.. :("
[5/5]
Content:
While I was reading your diary, I just fell in love with your writing. You write so discriptively and I can just see it and touch what you're talking about. You also have the talent of capturing your feelings and protraying them in your journal so that the reader can nearly feel that emotion also. I could really relate to this entry. I feel that exact same way at times and I could see that while writing that entry, you didn't hold back anything. You told how you felt about yourself and described how you felt. Some people hold back while admitting their own faults, but you threw them at us in full force and that shows courage and a true passion for writing. I thought I'd also point out something you said in your more recent entries that just made me smile. "And... um, oh my God... Hannah has decided to empty the sugar bowl all over my cupboard and floor... and right now she's looking at me with that familiar "I'm so bad and I love it" look. Grinning from ear to ear... yup, that's my kid." I found your content to be absolutely perfect.
[25/25]
Design:
Your template (Lissy Designs) goes well with your personality and it's really calming. Not too bright, not many flashy pictures, just calm and soothing. I think it would look nicer if things were moved upwards slightly to eliminate the double scrollbars. Your imood just looks kind of lonely down there at the bottom. Perhaps moving it to the top of the entry (after the date) will let readers know how you're feeling before they even begin to read the entry. Also, 'the spark' link seems out of place. Inserting center tags would make that look nicer, I believe. Other than those little things, I really like your template.
[21/25]
Updates:
You update just about every single day and with a few added extras every now and then. Good job!
[10/10]
Navigation:
Really simple, everything's at the bottom.
[5/5]
Errors:
Everything seems to be error-free to me! :)
[5/5]
Contact:
Email, notes, guestbook, guestmap
[5/5]
Bonus:
Wow! LOTS of extras that make your diary extra interactive! I'm pleased.
[15/15]
Returnable:
Most definitely. In fact, you can consider yourself a part of my favorites.. :) Fantastic journal.
[5/5]
Total: [96/100]
Amby
rock n roll
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