anie22
2003-04-18 � 3:00 p.m.
guren bed enni
I�m not in love, so don�t forget it
It�s just a silly phase I�m going through
And just because I call you up
Don�t get me wrong, don�t think you�ve got it made
Not In Love - Tori Amos
First Impressions:
Hum. Lots of brown. Cool picture.
[5/5]
Content:
First off. Yes, I know you had the lyrics I selected in your diary. They just seemed to fit so well, though (and I love that song)...so I used it again. Next. Your style of writing has progressed - I saw that much, comparing older to newer stuff. And, that's great. Really, though, after a while, it got to be repetitive. The only thing that redeemed it to me is that I have had some similar experiences...but to the average reader, it would get boring. You're depressed, you cut, your mom isn't their for you, you're a LOTRs fan, you're wiccan, and there are several guys in your life. That is what I got out of reading nearly your entire diary that is about 6 months old. It just feels like (to me) that you stay on the same topics, write about them, and nothing else. I was interested at what you had to say, but it just never seemed to get said. Write more and you'll be fantastic.
[11/25]
Design:
You didn't make it yourself...even so, I am not a big fan of the design. I didn't mind it really at first - everything matches and it has different scroll bar colors and all of that, don't get me wrong - I just...didn't like it. It got old. I didn't like how there was a border around the picture...
[17/25]
Update:
You don't update every day, but you have multiples aplenty.
[10/10]
Navigation:
So easy! I love it.
[5/5]
Errors:
I really didn't see many errors.
[5/5]
Contact:
guestbook, email, notes.
[5/5]
Bonus:
You have a cast/links/rings page, and a link you your profile. Not a lot, and it left me wanting a lot more!
[8/15]
Returnable:
I might, but probably not. It's nothing personal, I just didn't feel attached.
[2/5]
Total: [68/100]
Kate has rocked your world.
rock n roll
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