abfunkid
2003-04-16 � 7:07 p.m.
// riot girl
You used run me away,
All while laughing,
Then cry about that fact,
Til my returns.
But long before,
Having hurt,
I'll send the pain below,
I'll send the pain below.
-Send the Pain Below - Chevelle
First Impressions: So many things to see and do!
[5/5]
Content:
It seems like there is a lot to you, underneath. It was hard to see though - you seemed to just skim what you were feeling or meaning to say - like in this entry - you started out great, and I was really into reading it, then it seemed to just...be missing something when I finished. Contemplate more or something, I don't know. This entry was good, but it seemed like you were writing it just for others to read. And, again, I wanted to know more. Another thing, in your profile it said you had 300-some entries, but I could only read about 10...I'm not sure if that was on purpose or not. Basicly, Your writing needs more depth. I picked the lyrics I did, though, because it reminded me how you hinted at being through a lot - it just reminded me of the strength that you seem to have, having come through "everything."
[18/25]
Design:
You made it yourself, and thats always cool. There are lots of things to look at...I like how all of the colors match (a good thing, but a rare thing). Great rollovers and scrollbar usage. The only thing that was weird was the "next" link - it went to the "current" entry instead of the, well, next. I had to go to the archive every time...
[20/25]
Update:
You have updated every day since you started...that's great.
[10/10]
Navigation:
Like I said, the "next" link for the first few April entries, but other than that, navigation was fantastic.
[4/5]
Errors:
There were some typos, but it was generally pretty good.
[4/5]
Contact:
guesbook, email, diaryland notes, AIM. The usual.
[5/5]
Bonus:
You have a ton of stuff - cast, rings, about you, quizzes, 100 things, playlist, pictures, wishlist, links...holy man!
[15/15]
Returnable:
Probably not, because of the content things...you have a really good start, but it just didn't "strike my fancy," per say.
[2/5]
Total: [83/100]
Kate has rocked your world.
rock n roll
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