notbychoice
2003-04-06 � 9:20 p.m.
i want to feel free
The green autumnal parks conducting
All the city streets a wondrous chorus singing
All these poses oh how can you blame me
Life is a game and true love is a trophy
-Poses - Rufus Wainwright
First Impressions: Ahhh! Bright pink is assaulting my eyes!
[2/5]
Content:
Some entries were really interesting, and some were...well...not. And some just weren't there (I'm not sure what that was about). I really liked this entry. This entry was sad...The way you write (at least in most of your entries) is kind of choppy but fits together at the same time. Once I got into the diary, I liked how the entries sounded. The flow was really interrupted though by blank or one word entries. I picked the lyrics...well, I picked them because it just made me think of your writing and what I think Rufus is like (I have no idea what he is really like...).
[15/25]
Design:
You made your designs (or I assume as much, seeing the lack of a link to the designer). I liked the first design better than the current one - the pink hurts my eyes. I like how you have different words rather than just "home," "archive," or whatever for the links.
[18/25]
Update:
There are big spaces between when you update, and the entries that are the first in a while aren't any longer than the "normal" size to make up for it. But, you have some multiples.
[5/10]
Navigation:
All your links work, and like I said, I like how you have different words for the links.
[5/5]
Errors:
I didn't see any errors in the template, but there were some typos.
[4/5]
Contact:
You don't have any contact links readily available...
[0/5]
Bonus:
You don't have anything besides the diary.
[0/15]
Returnable:
Maybe once and a while, but not on a regular basis.
[2/5]
Total: [51/100] sorry...add some things that are scored on and try again.
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