o0jessikuh0o
2003-04-01 � 7:02 p.m.
o0jessikuh0o
Till I Collapse
"No, it's not going to stop,
Till you wise up.
No, it's not going to stop,
So just give up."
-Wise Up - Aimee Mann
First Impression:
Crowded. No colors.
[3/5]
Content:
Yay, my favorite movie is Fight Club too! You write mostly a daylog, but you maie it interesting. You should include something that explains your injury, I couldn't find anything about even though you keep mentioning it. Sometimes you just complain. More emotion needed, but you're on your way. I chose this song because you seem like you're about to give up some of the time.
[21/25]
Design:
You need color! The design is kind of disorganized, I would
keep the links all on one side, not each. And I don't like how I need to use both scrollbars, just one would be nice. The pink blinkie doesn't go with anything.
[20/25]
Updates:
Every other day or something.
[8/10]
Navigation:
Too all-over-the-place.
[4/5]
Errors:
You older entries page has all the december entries on it, and it should have the ones from this month. Why aren't those archived?
[3/5]
Contact:
E.mail, notes, guesbook, and AIM.
[5/5]
Bonus:
Link to other diaries, 101 thinks, quotes, 100% true, cast list, blinkies, counter... but you're lacking an "about me" page and rings and stuff.
[13/15]
Returnable:
Nah, I don't know enough about you
[2/5]
Total: [79/100]
Sarah wuz here.
rock n roll
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